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Azure Jane Lunatic (Azz) 🌺 ([personal profile] azurelunatic) wrote in [personal profile] ase 2016-03-15 04:08 am (UTC)

I love Mirabile. Jole left me mostly meh, and I think it was structural. The contents worked for me. The framing did not. I enjoyed Mirabile's little slices of life, showing the fragments of a largely peaceable frontier existence, assembled into a narrative collage of the world, small town life, and relationship. I wish this story had been in a structure that suited it similarly well.

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