I love Mirabile. Jole left me mostly meh, and I think it was structural. The contents worked for me. The framing did not. I enjoyed Mirabile's little slices of life, showing the fragments of a largely peaceable frontier existence, assembled into a narrative collage of the world, small town life, and relationship. I wish this story had been in a structure that suited it similarly well.
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Date: 2016-03-15 04:08 am (UTC)